Saturday, June 9, 2007

WAITING ...WAITING .....

third one ...... i have experimented this time ..... a poems are usually written in a singular prespective ..... but here there are two prespectives ..........it's more actually kinda duet song .....
summary : two lovers are in seperate places [:D](again) , the man's gone to war ..... the poem is how they communicate through the thoughts ... the paragraphhs alternate with the man's and his lovers thoughts and sayings (starting with the man)
inspired by Japanese folklore , that the samurai spoke to their beloved through their thoughts during their wartime expeditions .... . I love the medival setting .wish i knew some one who could compose this into a song .....


WAITING ...WAITING .....

As the mist clears in the sun's rise
a face looks in all it's beauty
heavenly poise ,a rainbow's semblance

The ray's caress me in the softest
a dew falls to my lips with your nectar
even as the eyes close , it becomes clear.

Let me drown in yours eyes forever
i am lying here waiting,you don't have to say
but tell me one more time........

I have given you myself
you don't have to ask , you know me
i am your's forever ........

I won't leave you for the world
for the world's not enough
in this time of reckoning
our beats have become one.....

If the words you say is in the passing wind
are the words just enough?
the hours with me in the shade
was it love or just a dream ......

In the battle thickest
my heart sings your song
if the field smears my blood
my life will be with you .....


Here in the dawn , why such words ....
don't you know me anymore ....

Just ask the clouds , they tell you my pain
i will know you even when the beat stops ......

The flower bed will sprout thorns
if the worlds do us apart
even the barren mists
when i am in your arms

The seconds weigh me down
in our paths different
even the seconds vanish
as they drop to your eyes ....

As you tease me , it rains even in the sun....

As you touch me , even the pains afraid .....

Why don't you come ,why the wait
is the date far .....

I will come , the date's near
but the wait is mine .......

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